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Week 3 story... You Should Change

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Story  Site   Carli was an only child and she loved it. Then one day her mother said to her, "Carli you are going to be a big sister!" To her dismay, she would no longer be an only child and that meant that what at one time was only hers, she would now have to share.  Time went by and eventually her mother gave birth to a little boy named Tommy. Carli hated sharing and would hide all the toys in her room, away from Tommy. She wanted everything only to herself. Her parents were not happy about her behavior but they also were not sure how to handle the situation exactly. The years went by and Carli only got worse. Every year at Tommy’s birthday party, Carli faked being sick so that she would have all of the attention. Eventually, this got old and people stopped buying her fake routine. Tommy who was very kind-hearted, always made sure his sister was happy and did whatever he could so that she would be. This, attracted people to Tommy, he was selfless and genuine. Car...

Reading Notes... Part A Ramayan

Ramayan: Part A By : Valmiki For this week's notes,  I  decided to  focus  on the setting. The author describes it with such detail. I was able to picture the setting since it included so many descriptors. " In the palace gardens there were numerous birds and flowers, shady groves of fruit trees, and lakes gemmed with bee-loved lotuses...", this phrase is at the beginning which helps the reader be able to envision the place that they are reading  about. Usually, when I have done creative writing, I always focus on the characters and the plot and not so much about describing the setting. This helps shape the story and plot itself. This is important especially to this story because it speaks of royalty and their kingdoms so describing these beautiful places adds to the tone of the story. Continuing into the other sections, they describe animals that were there and that is also important because it help...