Week 11 Story... Honesty is the Best Policy

Title: The Giant Crab and Other Tales from Old India
Author: W.H.D. Rouse

I have never been the kid that gets in trouble or that ends up in those situations. I have always done as I was told and always avoided conflicts with others. My mother always told me "honesty is the best policy" and those words constantly run through my mind. Being kind to others and showing compassion are other values that I hold dear to my heart.

My name is Bailey and I am a senior in high school. I grew up being the youngest of three and in many ways I was always over protected. My siblings would seldom listen to my parents and often did whatever they wanted. They still wanted me to succeed so they always kept a tight leash on what I did.

My parents always made sure I was involved in sports and because I became an athlete at such a young age, I was able to be on all the varsity teams for the sports that I played all throughout high school. I played basketball, football, baseball, and ran track. I helped my team win many championships. Now that is my senior year, I am president of student council and I enjoy getting to make a change at my high school. I take pride in everything that I do. I have always thought about having a more relaxed high school life but I just do not think I could do it. I enjoy being involved and doing good things for my community.

I get straight As in school and I will be valedictorian this year. Every month my mom and I volunteer at the local food shelter. We go about two times throughout the month. I have gotten to meet people there and I really enjoy that. I have always been caring towards others and often I find ways to help others do better. I will be applying to colleges soon and I have been actively building my resume. I will be retaking the college entrance exam so that I can achieve a higher score. The first time I took it, I let my anxiety get the best of me and I blanked out. I still do well and above average but I know I need to push myself to do even better. I want to get scholarship offers as well as universities. I am taking the exam today and I am extremely nervous. I have studied endlessly for it but for some reason I still feel incredibly nervous.

I get to the classroom and I take my seat. There are others around me that look just as nervous as I am. I wait for about 20 minutes. Finally! The test proctor walks in. As she walks by my desk she drops a packet. I picked it up and saw that it was the exam key. I am so tempted to keep it because I know it will guarantee me a solid score. My conscious is telling me to turn it and then I remember, "honesty is the best policy." Suddenly, I want the chance to think for myself and I decide to keep the answer key. I walk out of the exam and I know I got the score that I needed so now to celebrate while I wait on my score to be delivered in the mail.
                                                        Bubble sheet for exam. [source]

3 weeks later

My mom just texted me that I have mail. I get to my house faster than I usually ever do. I walk in and I see the letter on the table. I open it and read:

Dear Bailey,
                 We regret to inform you that your score was invalidated. It was brought to out attention that you took the exam with the help of the master exam key. The witness will not be disclosed. We are writing you to explain the next course of action. We will be notifying the universities that you listed as recipients of the scores. Unfortunately, it is in our policy that we must disclose the incident. Integrity is a core value of the board. We will be putting you on a one-year inability list. Once this term is up you will be allowed to retake the exam. 

                                                                                          Sincerely,
                                                                                                The Board of Higher Education

Suddenly, my face gets really hot, my stomach starts turning and tears run down my face. My future and career are destroyed! I will never get into the school that I wanted. I should have listened to my mother. If I would have taken the test on my own none of this would have happened. I would have retaken the exam if my score was not what I wanted. Now, I put everything at risk. I run out of the house to get some air and then I trip on the stairs of the porch. I land face first.

Then, I woke up. It was all a dream. My exam is in two hours.






Authors Note:

This story was derived from the tale, the “Dishonest Friend” from the book The Giant Crab, and Other Tales from Old India. In the story, the moral is that "honesty is the best policy." I used the same moral to create a different story that can still be relevant. In the original story, there are two friends and one asks to the other to take care of a plough. The dishonest friend sells the plough and then lies about it when the friend asks what happened to it. In my story, I decided to make it more about someone that is genuinely a good person but when he sees a chance to do something bad, he decides to take it versus doing the right thing. I do add a plot twist at the end to make it more of a lesson than can be learned and corrected. The original characters are two men but for my story I decided to make it first person about a boy named Bailey. He deals with dishonesty towards himself and peers. I wrote it in first person so that the twist at the end would have greater significance and effect on the story as a whole.

Comments

  1. Hey Catalina! I love stories in which the character has to stop and choose between what is wrong, but will help them succeed in other aspects of their life, and what is right. I am on OU Integrity Council, which is the student-led organization that handles cases of academic misconduct and this kind of story is right up my alley. You have inspired me to also try to write a story about academic misconduct from one of the Jataka tales, as this dilemma is one that many if not all students in this class have probably experienced!

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  2. Hey Catalina, I really like your story because of the meaning behind them. I really like how your stories was and what it was about. Choosing between what is wrong is a important concept because we face this challenge on a regular bases. I really like your idea about your story on how honesty is the best policy. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

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  3. Hi Cathy! I like your truly creative and original story! I like the fact that the story is written in concise and easy-to-read style. The plot and characters are truly rich as well. Your story is full of imagery and visual details. Wow.. This is a powerful message: "honesty is the best policy" which I really agree with. It takes a lot of effort to cover up a lie. Thank you for a great story!

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